Tumhare Janamdin Per(poem)

Happiness we share
Pain we share,
With whom we care…
And is very near, very dear!

Today is Poetic Friday
And ofcouse your birthday,
So we brought this poem here…
To wish you Happy Birthday dear !!

तुम्हारे जन्मदिन पर
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कहना चाहती थी हमेशा से
पर कह रही हुं तुम्हारे जन्मदिन पे,
तुम मेरे आत्मविश्वास को बढ़ाते हो
तुम मेरे जिन्दगी को परिभाषित करते हो।

सब तस्वीर चलचित्र सा घुम रहा है
तुम्हारा साथ आज नही, हरदम से ही खास रहा है,
इतना शांत, धीर, गंभीर कैसे रह पाते हो ?
तुम अनकहे शब्दो से मुक प्यार की अभिव्यक्ति करते हो।

तुम्हारे चेहरे की लकीरों की अद्भुत ज्योत्सना
तुम्हारा परिपक्वता से सब कुछ सोचना,
मुश्किल राहों पर मलमल बिखेरता है
दिल यह बार-बार स्वीकारता है ।

हम सब तुम बिन, हैं अधुरे से
इस प्यार की डोर के, हर छोर को मोड़ के,
घरौंदे में तुम्हारे छांव तले, पल सुकुन के
चलो साथ चले, मजबूती से हाथ थाम के ।

दुआ है रब से, उम्र तुम्हें लगे मेरी
सफलता बने प्रहरी, खुशीयां और भी हो गहरी,
मुश्किलें चाहे कितनी भी हो चट्टान सी ठहरी
राह दिखायेगा दुआओं का सहरी।

कहना चाहती थी हमेशा से
पर कह रही हुं तुम्हारे जन्मदिन पे ,
क्षितिज के इस छोर से उस छोर को, जोड़ के
साथ रहे हम सबका हर जनम मे।।
साथ रहे हम सबका हर जनम मे।।
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16 Comments Add yours

  1. Rajesh dhamge says:

    It’s ur poem…….

    Live it……..
    & every post is not 2b analysed. …or go in2 it’s genesis…

    Happy birthday sir…many happy returns of the day 🌅

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    1. mellowstorm says:

      Thank you ! This is very kind of you to say.☺

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  2. Lipi Mukherjee says:

    Wow cha gaye jiii …….tusi…..
    Hamesha khush reh…😍

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    1. mellowstorm says:

      Thank you…☺

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  3. Lipi Mukherjee says:

    Kya baat…kya baat…

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    1. mellowstorm says:

      Shukriya…☺

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  4. Lakshmi says:

    mam the poem is an excellent birthday gift. It is reflecting your love and affection.
    Belated happy returns of the birthday to sir.

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    1. mellowstorm says:

      Thank you for your kind words…

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  5. Rita Adhikari says:

    Nice b’day gift dear. Anyway belated countless returns of the day to my dear bhaiya. Really I love this poem in which your all emotions r there. such tum itna achha likhti ho dil khush ho jata hai. My all good wishes r with u.

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    1. mellowstorm says:

      Thank you for your nice words…

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  6. Vijayasinha says:

    Beautiful lines are straight from the heart of a lovely soul💐💐😊😊Our belated wishes for him Loved the lines

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    1. mellowstorm says:

      Thank you. Your words always encourages me…

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  7. Rajesh dhamge says:

    It’s very obvious to decipher from this poetic expression that a very pronounced company you have had so far with your soul-mate. Very humbly you have admitted that your life has been truly motivated & defined thereby through this courtship. Indeed this situation is so salubrious that I can imagine how caring you might have been for the minutest & trivial matters. Nevertheless it’s more commendable that you haven’t forgotten the past which has witnessed the graduation of this relationship into bliss. SIR I HAVE SEEN YOU, ADMIRED YOUR APLOMB & NO DOUBT YOU ARE A MAN OF LIMITED WORDS & THAT REALLY MAKES A MAN MORE POWERFUL. This trait is worth imbibing. Silence is golden, no doubt.

    However I can’t relate and gauge your thoughtfulness as this sort is purely feminine gesture of which men are deprived to exhibit, nonetheless it can be construed that both the counterparts are free of any erring. Seldom this happens to witness such ideal courtship but yes it happens when twosome are exactly as narrated. Few of your line are quite flabbergasting me & I can’t copy the code what you did mean…. “hum sab …….hur chhor ko mod k” ….but somehow I would say I shouldn’t have endeavored to write this view as the genesis is purely personal to be comprehended & publicized……. yet I wish Sir once again “BELATED HAPPY BIRTHDAY” once again

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    1. mellowstorm says:

      Relationship is all about caring and sharing. My neighbour, an elderly couple…despite having several domestic helps…the old gentleman combs his ailing wife’s hair himself…is a perfect example that a growing relationship can only be nurtured by genuineness…
      Thank you for such beautiful words.

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  8. Medha dave says:

    Bahut hi sunder kavita.bhvnao ki itni khubsurat abhivyakti …happy birthday to sir.

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    1. mellowstorm says:

      Thank you so much…

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