With festivals and busy schedule, just couldn’t makeup my mindset to write. Now I am back on Poetic Friday with this poem for my daughter, whose birthday was in first week of the month. Hope you will reciprocate my feelings if you are a parent, or the doting child of your parent. Here goes my poem ‘TEMPLE OF HEALING ‘.



The drops of words revealing
A special pearl in the ocean of feelings
She spreads happiness like ultimate ceiling
Giving my life an exquisite meaning
She makes me write…..
She is my temple of healing !

The sparkle in her eyes
Mischievous grin like the angel from the sky
Her presence makes the family tie
Like the bouquet of roses fresh and bright
She makes me write….
She gives me the wings to fly !

Sometimes she is the baby in my arm
Sometimes she preaches like a saint, so calm
She is the achiever with poise and charm
She can heal anyone from hurt and harm
She makes me write…..
She is the best lines of my palm !

When low and down, I pretend to be energize
All says, perfect strength and energy, you symbolize
But she reads my mind and the truth she spies
You need rest, comes her firm piece of advice
She makes me write……
She is the windchime of my life !

My daughter, my angel, my pride
I want to protect her and fight
From the evils hidden or on sight
I pray for the blessings on her of the divine light
She make me write….
She is the treasure of my delight
She is the first ray of my daylight
She is the blessing of my life !!



54 thoughts on “TEMPLE OF HEALING (POEM)

  1. So nice of you for having written exquisitely crafted lines on a proud mother for having a lil angel. ….bearing a child and then delivering a girl child wholeheartedly. …consequently nurturing her obviously paves way for perpetual coherence between fairy mom darling angel daughter ….naturally then it has to be temple of healing….

    Give me time to write at length. ….but u gave an eternal gift to Your daughter shreya. …GOD bless her always

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  2. First of all A Very Happy Birthday to your Temple, goddess and Angel of healing! May God bless her with never ending happiness!
    Secondly this is such a beautiful piece of poetry as if your heart has melted into words spreading magic! Daughters are definitely angels no doubt! 🙂

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    Children are most prized possessions of their parents; therefore it becomes hard for parents to distinguish between their own children, yet there is the most lovable affinity for their girl child only. Our society may be male biased yet it’s the male parent who adores his little angel most and worries most when she departs after her nuptial knots. There is a process of healing through parent child relationship. A mother has her own way biologically to bring forth the new born and so is altogether different way for a father to bring a new born. Since the passage is through mother the sentiments of mother needs a salute with gratitude. Thus the process for mother & father for their healing up are different……healing is nothing but a kind of happiness attained through the feeling of being a parent….i remember how my daughter also would prefer her mom more than me when it’s some erring father at other side of phone. So a poem to commemorate a birthday is the best privilege & tribute to Shreya on her birthday.

    Vow!!! Is what comes to me to read the opening rhyming lines….wherein you classify the happiness experienced worth enough to rejuvenate & cure you, because within the conflicts of feelings & its priorities you are most happy when the little angel has prescribed you with small drops of elixir in form of her calls of trust & dependability on you, which is effective enough to forget all your miseries. Naturally it’s obvious that if you have respite & are healed then there is enough go within you to fly high. Yes I do agree that if the family is clubbed due to one such little angel then there is certainly that freshness & brightness due to this feeling.

    Astrology allows one to foresee their future and one such faculty is that of palmistry. We rely quite often & yet forget to believe such things when the going is good. But the relationship within family especially due to such little angel turns good if she can pamper herself and then yet tries to be our Guru. Such angels then grow up to become homemaker & breadwinners too….and yes this happens due to the bliss brought by such little angels……which we ignorant ones say that this is predicted through lines, but I would like to say that it’s the endeavor of a mother fairies who nurtures these angels to bring home the ultimate happiness.

    Wind chimes thwarts the evil forces & ensure goodness within……….this is significantly recreated through the verse that angels can gauge the veiled distress within you & thus her presence enables the restoration as a guide or rector……..naturally if she has moved you to describe her as temple of healing or wings to fly or line of fortune or wind chime then she is certainly a blessing to you, a hope to depend upon and cause to be happy forever…….THEREFORE I PRAY THAT SHREYA BE YOUR DAUGHTER, ANGEL & PRIDE WHOM YOU WOULD SAFEGUARD TILL SHE IS UNDER THE PARASOL OF DIVINE LIGHT.

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