With festivals and busy schedule, just couldn’t makeup my mindset to write. Now I am back on Poetic Friday with this poem for my daughter, whose birthday was in first week of the month. Hope you will reciprocate my feelings if you are a parent, or the doting child of your parent. Here goes my poem ‘TEMPLE OF HEALING ‘.
TEMPLE OF HEALING
The drops of words revealing
A special pearl in the ocean of feelings
She spreads happiness like ultimate ceiling
Giving my life an exquisite meaning
She makes me write…..
She is my temple of healing !
The sparkle in her eyes
Mischievous grin like the angel from the sky
Her presence makes the family tie
Like the bouquet of roses fresh and bright
She makes me write….
She gives me the wings to fly !
Sometimes she is the baby in my arm
Sometimes she preaches like a saint, so calm
She is the achiever with poise and charm
She can heal anyone from hurt and harm
She makes me write…..
She is the best lines of my palm !
When low and down, I pretend to be energize
All says, perfect strength and energy, you symbolize
But she reads my mind and the truth she spies
You need rest, comes her firm piece of advice
She makes me write……
She is the windchime of my life !
My daughter, my angel, my pride
I want to protect her and fight
From the evils hidden or on sight
I pray for the blessings on her of the divine light
She make me write….
She is the treasure of my delight
She is the first ray of my daylight
She is the blessing of my life !!
Mellowstorm 
Priceless poem🌹🌹May God bless your daughter😍😍
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Thank you so much. May God bless all the children.😊😊
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ale meri mummmmyy 😀 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 😀 🙂 🙂 😀
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When is the belated partyyyy 😀
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Daughters r angels sent from above to fill our heart with never ending love. Nice ,very nice poem
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Very true….thank you for liking my poem !😊
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This is beautiful…. daughters are indeed god sent blessings in form of humans. Only the lucky ones have daughters. Many happy returns of the day to your angel
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Thank you so much ! Yeah…blessing from God comes in many different way…..and daughter is the best way to bless with…
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Yes! That’s how I feel about my darling daughter. Thank you! 😉 xoM
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Thank you for reciprocating my feelings. God bless your angel !
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And yours! 😉 xoM
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Thank you !
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So nice of you for having written exquisitely crafted lines on a proud mother for having a lil angel. ….bearing a child and then delivering a girl child wholeheartedly. …consequently nurturing her obviously paves way for perpetual coherence between fairy mom darling angel daughter ….naturally then it has to be temple of healing….
Give me time to write at length. ….but u gave an eternal gift to Your daughter shreya. …GOD bless her always
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Thanks a lot for penning such beautiful words and thanks for your blessings. God bless your angel too !
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dear friend,
have happy sunday,
ciao by
Rinaldo
from Italy.
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Thank you so much. You too have a blessed sunday. !
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Even I feel the same with my daughters. Many more happy returns of the day to your daughter
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Thanks a lot…..may your angels be the windchime of your life always !
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Thanks 😊
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😊😊
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Lovely n priceless poem.First of all I wish my all blessings for our lovely daughter on her b’day.May God bless her. Your poem is too good…n too emotional.Really daughters are priceless and it’s God gift.
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Thank you so much for such hearty reciprocation. I know even your daughter is the best line of your palm…May God bless her !
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So beautiful am so touched by your overall poem and such beautiful pictures of a girl. Lovely.
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Thank you very much ! That’s very kind of you to say !
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Beautiful Poem!
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Thank you so much !
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First of all A Very Happy Birthday to your Temple, goddess and Angel of healing! May God bless her with never ending happiness!
Secondly this is such a beautiful piece of poetry as if your heart has melted into words spreading magic! Daughters are definitely angels no doubt! 🙂
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Thank you so much Meenakshi. Your words are very encouraging !
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Wonderful poetry! I also have a daughter and I recognize my feelings in your poem
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Thank you for the visit and your hearty response !
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Happy birthday to dear shreya.really nice poem.
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Thanks for liking the poem and for the wishes !
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beautiful.. bless your child..
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Thank you for such kind words !
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Liked ur poem very much.it was just superb!
Really daughters are the pride of the parents,blessings of the life,a gift from the god.
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Thank you so much for appreciating and for this bouquet of beautiful words !
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TEMPLE OF HEALING
Children are most prized possessions of their parents; therefore it becomes hard for parents to distinguish between their own children, yet there is the most lovable affinity for their girl child only. Our society may be male biased yet it’s the male parent who adores his little angel most and worries most when she departs after her nuptial knots. There is a process of healing through parent child relationship. A mother has her own way biologically to bring forth the new born and so is altogether different way for a father to bring a new born. Since the passage is through mother the sentiments of mother needs a salute with gratitude. Thus the process for mother & father for their healing up are different……healing is nothing but a kind of happiness attained through the feeling of being a parent….i remember how my daughter also would prefer her mom more than me when it’s some erring father at other side of phone. So a poem to commemorate a birthday is the best privilege & tribute to Shreya on her birthday.
Vow!!! Is what comes to me to read the opening rhyming lines….wherein you classify the happiness experienced worth enough to rejuvenate & cure you, because within the conflicts of feelings & its priorities you are most happy when the little angel has prescribed you with small drops of elixir in form of her calls of trust & dependability on you, which is effective enough to forget all your miseries. Naturally it’s obvious that if you have respite & are healed then there is enough go within you to fly high. Yes I do agree that if the family is clubbed due to one such little angel then there is certainly that freshness & brightness due to this feeling.
Astrology allows one to foresee their future and one such faculty is that of palmistry. We rely quite often & yet forget to believe such things when the going is good. But the relationship within family especially due to such little angel turns good if she can pamper herself and then yet tries to be our Guru. Such angels then grow up to become homemaker & breadwinners too….and yes this happens due to the bliss brought by such little angels……which we ignorant ones say that this is predicted through lines, but I would like to say that it’s the endeavor of a mother fairies who nurtures these angels to bring home the ultimate happiness.
Wind chimes thwarts the evil forces & ensure goodness within……….this is significantly recreated through the verse that angels can gauge the veiled distress within you & thus her presence enables the restoration as a guide or rector……..naturally if she has moved you to describe her as temple of healing or wings to fly or line of fortune or wind chime then she is certainly a blessing to you, a hope to depend upon and cause to be happy forever…….THEREFORE I PRAY THAT SHREYA BE YOUR DAUGHTER, ANGEL & PRIDE WHOM YOU WOULD SAFEGUARD TILL SHE IS UNDER THE PARASOL OF DIVINE LIGHT.
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You dip your pen in ink of thoughts and come up with such beautiful comments. Thank you so much, Rajesh!
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Thank you for following us, and we loved the poem. As mothers and daughters, your words were well felt!
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Thank you for loving the poem! Yes indeed, this relationship is really precious…
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Lovely poem! Thanks for following my blog and introducing me to yours!
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Thank you, Katelon! I am glad you liked the poem. Pleased to meet you…
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Definitely resonating with this! My daughter (now nearing 40) as an early teen transformed me from technical writer to poet – talk about a blessing! Love your rhyming and the poem overall.
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Thank you so much for loving my poem. Daughters are really blessings….May God bless your daughter!
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Even a childfree person can appreciate and see the beauty in this poem. I like the rhyme scheme for its consistency and how it expresses the feeling herein.
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I am glad my poem could evoke those feelings…thank you so much!
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oops, I forgot to add, thank you for following my Blog!
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My pleasure! You write so well.
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😊😊
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She is the best lines of my palm !
Artful imagery. Thanks for visiting my blog.
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Thank you! I am glad you liked the poem.
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